英语评语

18 Street Japan 20 of November,2011
Dear Penny,
We have not seen each other for one year. I miss you very much. How are you I am very fine. So you do not worry about me. It is cold in Shanghai. Is it very cold in Japan My family has moved into a new flat. It is on the third floor. My new flat is much bigger than the old one. It is very nice to live here. A lot of changes have taken place in Shanghai .There are many buildings in Shanghai. Our city is developing quickly these years. Tell you a good message that I am going to Japan to see you next week.
Miss you ,
Shi MengFan
教师评语:
You have done a very good job in writing this letter. With time going on, I am sure that you will do better in your English study. Hope that you will succeed in your study.