负疚之情:两支笛子-My Two Flutes

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两支笛子
【内容提示】
假如你有某种爱好，想报考某一专业，比如音乐专业、美术专业、体育专业等。而这种爱好又不符合你父母的心愿。平时，他们怕影响你的学习，就把你爱好的东西藏起来或损坏了。你对他们很有意见，不想理他们。但过了一段时间，他们又给你把东西拿出来了或又给你买了更好的你爱好的东西，你反而觉得有些歉疚。请你就此写一篇文章。
【作文示范】
My Two Flutes
I have two flutes①。 One is complete and good; the other broken。Every time I see them， I can＇t help feeling sorry and thinking of my dear father。
I like playing the flute very much。 Although I＇m busy with my studies， I try hard to find time to play it。 And I believe I play it quite well。 At the last New Year party I played for my class， and everyone praised my performance。 I made up my mind to become an excellent flute player， so I told my father that I wanted to enter Taishan Music and Dance College to learn playing the flute， but he wouldn＇t agree。
In the last final examinations I got poor marks and my father was angry。 Not only did he hit me， but he also broke my flute。 He told me not to play the flute any more。
A few days later I noticed my father was no longer angry with me。 He seemed to feel sorry for what he had done。 Several times he wanted to have a talk with me， but I walked away， because I had not forgiven him。
The other day a classmate of mine told me that my father had come to the school to see me。 As I was still angry with him and did not wish to see him。 I asked the classmate to tell him that I was not in the classroom。 A moment later my classmate returned with a beautiful flute in his hand and a smile on his face。 “How kind and considerate② your father is!” he said in an envious③ tone。
“Ah， my dear father!”I said to myself， while tears began running down my face。
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期）
【词语解释】
①flute [flu:t] n．长笛；竹笛
②considerate [k+n＇sid+rit] a．考虑周到的；体贴的
③envious [＇envi+s] a．妒忌的；羡慕的
【写法指要】
本文写父子各自都怀有的内疚心情：父亲把儿子的笛子弄坏了，觉得对不起儿子；儿子生父亲的气，不理父亲，觉得内疚。
文章第一段就把作者负疚的心理表达出来了，然后写事情的来龙去脉。第二段写作者的爱好和抱负；第三段写考试的失败和父亲的不满；第四段写父亲的内疚和作者的抵触情绪；第五段写父亲给儿子赔不是，儿子不理；第六段写作者负疚的心理。从第二段到第五段每段都写有矛盾冲突，这是这类文章的特点。最后一段作者没有向同学表白什么，只是流泪。但是一切均在不言中。这种写法耐人寻味。